You recently met a manager of a new company started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company. However, you cannot accept the job offer.
Write him back and say:
• How you feel about the job.
• Why can't you accept it
• Provide a reference to your friend who might be interested.
Dear Sir,
Thank you very much for offering me a job as a Regional Manager after having a face-2-face conversation in your new office in the city.
It would be an honor for me to join your prestigious organization as its one of the top-notch company with a strong footprint across the Middle East region. The job looks very exciting to me as the incumbent will having a team of 150 employees to look after across the region, and reports directly to the Managing Director.
Nevertheless, I respectfully decline your offer at this juncture due to the existing workload. I have a total of 5 projects in hand, and all are in the last stages; therefore, I would like to stay for another six months’ time with my employer to complete my assigned projects and handle over to the client.
However, I would like to refer you to a friend of mine who is currently looking for a lead role in the city. He holds a master’s degree along with over 25 years of experience with multinational companies in the region. He would like to accept a reasonable package and available immediately to grab the role.
Again, thank you for your time, and kind consideration.
Best Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80193236715 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88788698636 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4311284388 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210403793145 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803320967184 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812208331425 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128794080502 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837904128386 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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