You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you Write a letter to your friend In your letter invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house

Dear Aman,

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health.I'm writing to invite you to stay over at my new place.I would be glad if you come on 25th December during Christmas holidays.

My new house is built on twice the area than the previous one and it has all the modern amenities such as a swimming pool, spacious parking space, modular kitchen and attached bathrooms.It also has a garden in front yard where I have grown varieties of ornamental plants which enhance the aesthetic appearance of the place.

As you know that I was living in an apartment on rent and it would take 1 hour for commuting from my place to office.Now, I have shifted to sector 35 which is just 15 minutes away from my workplace.I have now enough time to spend with my family members.

I hope you will join us soon.Look forward to enjoy your company

Regards,
Veerpal

Plz review this essay for me for task response, coherence and cohesion,lexical resource and grammatical range and accuracy and give me valuable response.thanks in advance

Votes
Average: 5.2 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Im
... letter finds you in the pink of health.Im writing to invite you to stay over at m...
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... letter finds you in the pink of health.Im writing to invite you to stay over at m...
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...invite you to stay over at my new place.It would be glad if you come on 25th Decem...
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...embers. I hope you will join us soon.Look forward to enjoy your company Regard...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to enjoying'.
Suggestion: to enjoying
...hope you will join us soon.Look forward to enjoy your company Regards, Veerpal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45257449031 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730769230769 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7848933473 44.8134815571 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 76.5299724578 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.0 16.8248392259 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.25 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243493955771 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132640602774 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869719285784 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138215317685 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910333932579 0.0580467560999 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 8.37731958763 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 7.45979381443 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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