The obesity rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many developed countries.Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
Include relevant examples from your own experience.
Burgeoning number of obese children has become a matter of serious concern in first world countries.This essay will discuss the reasons for increasing obesity among children along with some possible solutions to alleviate this problem.
To begin with,the prime reason for obesity is the consumption of junk food items in school canteens.This could be due to busy schedule of working parents who do not have time to cook meals and to supervise the eating habits of their children.Moreover, children often prefer to indulge in indoor activities instead of performing physical exercises.A survey conducted by Oxford University on children between age group 13-19 revealed that most teenagers prefer to play video games rather than playing outside in the park.
This issue can be reign-in by placing a ban on junk food stalls in educational institutes or introduction of healthy food items in place of fast food.Furthermore, children should be supervised by guardians for the healthy eating habits.They should also inculcate with the motivation for participating in physical activities.Schools should make it mandatory for all students to actively participate in extra curricular activities.
Summing up,with less availability of junk food and more involvement in routine exercises,the problem of obesity can be curbed in youngsters which eventually leads to the formation of a healthy society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60663507109 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27146755201 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677725118483 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.425397526 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 295.75 106.682146367 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.75 20.7667163134 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138256435177 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934898262586 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965650116029 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934898262586 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965650116029 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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