You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.
Write a letter to the restaurant's manager, In your letter :
-->Explain that you would like to apply for the job.
-->Give some details of any relevant experience that you have.
-->Specify the days and time that would suit you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the post of a waiter in your renowned restaurant. I saw your advert in yesterday's newspaper
indicating that you have vacancies for the part-time job.
I have done a diploma in housekeeping from DAV college. Additionally, I have learned all the mandatory activities such as cleaning,
dealing with customers and managing the crowd, as part of my curriculum. Also, my two-month training at Taj Hotel has inculcated the qualities of leadership and management in my work.
Furthermore, I have one year of experience as a waiter at the Aldo Restaurant, Delhi. Adding to this, I have experience in managing huge groups and overcrowded parties in an efficient manner. Dealing with foreign visitors has improved my communication skill that
makes me more suitable for this job.
As I am pursuing my further studies, evening work time after 5 pm on weekdays and full day work on weekends will be suitable for me.
This job is quite essential to pay the expenses of my studies.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhjot Kaur
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-16 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave vacancies for the part-time job. I have done a diploma in housekeeping fro...
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Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing huge groups and overcrowded parties in an efficient manner. Dealing with foreign visitors has impr...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has improved my communication skill that makes me more suitable for this job. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02688172043 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96437494057 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.489728561 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153795111029 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587195261167 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062739034103 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806798407926 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798870981257 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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