You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter:
give details about the order you made
explain what was wrong with the item
tell the company what you want them to do about it
Dear Sir,
I am a regular customer of your company's products. Today, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the order that I recently placed on your online website.
Recently, I have ordered a combo package of iPhone cover and tempered glass. The order was placed on 25th June 2020 and my order number is AX8765P. The items included were a back cover for the iPhone XS model and a screen protection glass for the same.
When I received the order on 29th June, I was shocked on seeing the delivered product. The screen protection glass had a crack in it and the print of the back cover was completely damaged. Unfortunately, I could not use both of them.
Therefore, I would like you to either replace my order or provide me a full refund of the payment I had done including delivery charges and tax. I would appreciate it if you could look into this matter at your earliest convenience.
I hope you will take the required action. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Jaskaran
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-08-21 | Firdouspathan | 100 | view |
| 2020-12-13 | ghostwriter | 73 | view |
| 2020-09-20 | KarishmaKaul | 89 | view |
| 2020-07-13 | Jaskaran Kaur | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hope you will take the required action. I look forward to hearing from you. Y...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jaskaran
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65078604694 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9898675497 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1538461538 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252468799797 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768346370627 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418134923383 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126003563151 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197915800076 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.