Dear Sir,
I am writing this with respect to the all-day meeting held last Monday at your hotel. This was not the 1st time my company “Auto Soft” held a meeting here but unfortunately this time we received some negative feedback regarding the food from our guests.
First, I would like to thank you for such a pleasant atmosphere, all guests were mesmerized by the ambiance of the hotel. Your staff was very professional and guests were quite happy with the service provided during the meeting.
However, our guests were not happy with the food that was served during lunch. Most of the food specially desi dishes were undercooked and had unbearable onion and garlic smell. In addition, the crockery used to serve food was not up to the mark.
By keeping in mind hotel previous service we will not leave any negative review on your page and would suggest you check on the staff of the kitchen especially regarding the training of chef. All the staff under him should also be supervised appropriately.
I look forward to hearing from you at earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at earliest. Yours faithfully, Saad
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, regarding, so, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94623655914 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53177289145 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.76711397 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265408454839 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931163977568 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535645263844 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125163403495 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464890662539 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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