You recently organised an all-day event for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback , participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but there were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
letter to a manager the hotel.
1. What participants liked about the hotel.
2. Explain why there were unhappy about the food
3. Suggest that manager should do about the food to improve.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to give feedback to a recent event I organized at your hotel. As you are aware that I work for an international multinational and in our constant endeavour to improve the overall experience in these meetings we conduct a survey at the end of the event in which we collect feedback.
For the event organized at your hotel, most of the participants were very satisfied with the customer service and ambience of your hotel. To elucidate, they felt that the hotel staff was very welcoming and attended to all the requests from the guests. However on the other side, there were many complaints about the quality of the food which was served in the brunch and dinner, many guests were unhappy about the food preparation and foul smell coming from certain dishes.
Hence I would request you to look into this matter and as a part of a regular routine, I would suggest doing a prior check on the food preparation for such important events so that we can improve the overall experience of such meetings for our company. I look forward to your immediate response on the same.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...l smell coming from certain dishes. Hence I would request you to look into this m...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esponse on the same. Yours sincerely Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69417475728 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53777660838 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8579000469 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395065174486 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13267863732 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774285513548 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238235393316 0.12726935374 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799562463063 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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