You recently organized an all- day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Hello Sir/Mam
I am Abhishek Singh, off lately, I booked your hotel "The Saphhire" In kurukshetra for our team meeting which held on 26th September.I am writing this letter with the concern as feedback provided by company's employees were not upto mark and they were not happy with the food.
Undoubtedly, the ambience of the hotel was very good and every person in the meeting love it. It was well air-conditioned and setting was also comfortable. However, the way food was served was not good. Even the less, lunch served was not well cooked and quality of food can be improved.
I would like to suggest to make food more happening and most-importantly, you should change your catering service. They were rude and when ever any one ordered something , they just ignore and keep on doing their tasks. I hope you are able to understand my concerns and shall take some promising steps.
Yours faithfully
Abhishek Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and when ever any one ordered something , they just ignore and keep on doing thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9872611465 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73866398154 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726114649682 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0333259292 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322208252177 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101208559576 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557917597558 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180844238101 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03488584835 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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