nowadays, many people have access to computers and a wide basis and large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize their bad effects?
In the modern era, children get access to technology in their tender age. They play games on technological platforms which has become a popular activity. Kids discuss these games in there schools and parks and these games have the miserable effects on childhood which are stated in the essay.
Undoubtedly, computer games have plenty of bad effects on juveniles in the physical and psychological way. Physically, children sit in the front of screens for hours without considering their posture, due to which seldom, their eyesight gets weaker and on the worsen days, they deplore with pain in their eyes. Referring to psychological matter, due to the consequences of violent games, they start dealing with difficulties in aggressive ways and ill-behave with other people. Apart from this, educationally, their grades start decreasing due to these distractions and from enormous surveys, it is found that pupils who play games online score less than the others who do not.
Above mentioned problems can be tackled deliberatively. While at home, it is the responsibility of parents to ensure that their child is not spending precious time on games. They should participate more in their kids' life so that any change in their behavior can be noticed. During the school hours, teachers should keep an eye on pupils and supervise their discussions so that their security does not get breached. For instance, the Blue Whale game, which is also known as suicidal game, was the major reason due to which thousands of children committed suicide and this was the common topic of discussion the schools.
To recapture, violent games should be demolished or barraged with the certain age group while educational games should be promoted up to some extent under surveillance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ldom, their eyesight gets weaker and on the worsen days, they deplore with pain in their e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1958041958 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78182837774 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9843592958 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207285245921 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758372655319 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455927036656 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117734520707 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314726044461 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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