You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
• Say what the participants like about the hotel
• explain why they were unhappy about the food
• suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding the gathering that our company held in your hotel last week. I would like to give you our feedback of that experience.
Firstly, we were pleased about the arrangements in the Business Center. My colleagues complemented the cleanness of it and were happy with service provided by the center staff. Your employees were so professional that they prepared the required equipment on the spot. The equipment itself was in an excellent condition and helped us to facilitate our proceedings.
However, we have some complaints about your open- buffet restaurant. Some of my colleagues said that the amount of some dishes was not enough. The Indian Biryani is an example. Others complained that the roasted chickens were not cooked enough. Also, vegetables and fruits were not fresh.
If I was to give some advice, perhaps it would be a good idea to keep an eye of the consumption of the served dishes during the lunch period and make sure that all items are available all the time. With regarding to the cooking, there are some special kinds of food that need experienced chefs to cook them well. I think you may try to hire such calibers. Finally, it would be useful not to use fruits or vegetables that had been bought more than 2 days earlier.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Khaled Ibrahim.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84453781513 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61083998317 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626050420168 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6367590042 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8235294118 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193750149402 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519188047153 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284700099939 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090308462483 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335314598057 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.