You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
1. What is the article about?
2. What is the error?
3. What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to an incorrect fact which has been published in your newspaper edition on 15th October. The article is about Dr Sam Peter’s research on climate change.
Although the content of the article is extremely informative, this one particular fact about Dr Sam’s experience in the field is misleading. As a world-renowned scientist, he has started his research on climate change in the early ’80s. To be precise, he had published his first research paper in August 1981. However, in your article which has been mentioned as August 1991. This probably could be a typo but which impact greatly on his level of experience as well as the credibility of his research paper. In fact, this would also impact the reputation of your newspaper as well.
As a member of his research team, whilst appreciating the effort you put to disseminate scientific information to the mass through your newspaper, I kindly request you to correct the aforementioned fact and published the corrected details in your upcoming edition.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Daniel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, in fact, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30601092896 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98823676432 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0297057081 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141823421085 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528429510321 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500322754233 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107111586574 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336774119527 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.