Dear Sir or Madam,
I am David Robinson, a resident in London. I am writing in regard of an an article published in 24th November about a cuisine chef that recently received his first michelin star. I was overwhelmed after reading this article as it is about my friend Dan, a very dear childhood friend with whom i lost contact for over a decade.
Me and berry were inseparable for most of our childhood. However, when we were in our 5th grade, my father got transfered to another country due to work compulsion. We stayed in touch over letters for a few years, but unfortunately the contact vanished over time as we got busy with our respective lives.
Coming across such an exceptional peace on Dan brought back memories from childhood that are worth remembering. I would like to reunite my friendship with Dan again and that is why i would kindly ask you about his contact details. If it conflicts with your confidentiality, i will send you my contact so you can pass on to him.
I look forward to hearing from you, and can't wait to meet my friend again.
Yours faithfully,
Andi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: an
...nt in London. I am writing in regard of an an article published in 24th November abou...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: an; an
...nt in London. I am writing in regard of an an article published in 24th November abou...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ently received his first michelin star. I was overwhelmed after reading this arti...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a very dear childhood friend with whom i lost contact for over a decade. Me a...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iendship with Dan again and that is why i would kindly ask you about his contact ...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...it conflicts with your confidentiality, i will send you my contact so you can pas...
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Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...I look forward to hearing from you, and cant wait to meet my friend again. Yours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65641025641 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70293871777 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1974850301 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368181912873 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114753496943 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087874798532 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174791333587 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807732262382 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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