It is argued that possessing a huge amount of money is the best way to achieve happiness in life. Undeniably, money can fulfill the materialistic needs of an individual who seeks joy in such accomplishments. However, money is not the only key to happiness. There are other ways as well and simple every day things like enjoying a hot coffee on a cold morning or starting the dinner table with loved ones can also makes us happy and delighted. Helping people in need such as homeless children, and being a influencer to change for better individuals lives, is also another way of finding happiness in life.
First and foremost, people who are financially secure could easily fulfill their materialistic needs and desires of their lives which in return gives them a sense of satisfaction. Compared to middle class people, the rich sections of the society can easy satisfy their materialistic needs by buying high end car, travelling to luxury locations and wearing expensive brands. Furthermore, the reach people have the luxury of getting the best health-care treatments which is not exactly available to common man.
On the flip side, apart from the materialistic wants, an individual can seek happiness from various other things. One of them is sharing the dinner table with their families after a tiring day at office. Certainly, eating with the loved ones automatically eliminates stress and worries. Secondly, rendering help to poor and needy can also give some sense of achievement .
Also contributing by being a influencer can change people perspectives and be more aware for building a better life.
To conclude, it is quite evident from the aforementioned instances that money buys you all the materialistic comforts in the world. Nevertheless, spending time with close ones and helping the impoverished could also bring delight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18060200669 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92513057638 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9661106553 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272738151663 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825951276079 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722304478827 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134971908612 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101890124899 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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