Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the special edition of "City Life" which was printed last Sunday, 24th July, 2019. The Editorial section had an article. The title of the article was "Learning curve in teenagers". The columnist has elaborated about a seminar presented by "Radhika Shukla" in his office. Radhika Shukla is a Senior Surgeon in the City Hospital.
Dr. Radhika is my dear friend from class 2nd . As we grew up, we went to different colleges. At first, we used to write letters to each other.But due to demanding college schedule the frequency of our communication reduced. Before we could share our contacts , we moved ahead for further studies. It has now been approximately 10 years since i have left my college and i could not hear from her since then.
I would be grateful if you could inform her about my concern. I an sending my complete address along with this letter. Or in accordance with your company policy if i can get her email id,i t will be of great help.
I am looking forward for your positive reply. Thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
SS
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2019'.
Suggestion: July 2019
...os; which was printed last Sunday, 24th July, 2019. The Editorial section had an article. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to curve'
Suggestion: to curve
...title of the article was 'Learning curve in teenagers'. The columnist has e...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apos;Learning curve in teenagers'. The columnist has elaborated about a semina...
^^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...Radhika is my dear friend from class 2nd . As we grew up, we went to different col...
^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... we used to write letters to each other.But due to demanding college schedule the f...
^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uced. Before we could share our contacts , we moved ahead for further studies. It ...
^^
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... years since i have left my college and i could not hear from her since then. ...
^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ou could inform her about my concern. I an sending my complete address along with ...
^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...ou could inform her about my concern. I an sending my complete address along with ...
^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... accordance with your company policy if i can get her email id,i t will be of gre...
^
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...company policy if i can get her email id,i t will be of great help. I am looki...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89690721649 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9068919527 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.726804123711 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3906767384 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.375 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.125 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218743420113 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645156420459 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463045186514 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123158670349 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512000621607 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.