Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the broken cloth hanging hooks in the women's changing room. All the existing hooks are too loose to hold a napkin let alone pants or wet towels.Since it has been more than 6 months the changing rooms are extensively used, the continuous load has weaken the wall hooks.We are unable to keep any cloths clean as while changing we have to put our cloths on floor.
I have complained about it last week, the maintenance did tighten the screws but it took only 2 days for cloths to fall back on floor along with with it. People have been complaining about it from months but there has been no potential result or permanent solution.
I would request you to kindly talk with the maintenance guys and get to know what is stopping them from applying a permanent fix on the hooks.Please help them to buy strong nuts and bolts of the correct size which will fit in properly for long time.
Looking forward for your speedy reply.
Yours sincerely,
SS
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... a napkin let alone pants or wet towels.Since it has been more than 6 months the chan...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'weakened'.
Suggestion: weakened
...tensively used, the continuous load has weaken the wall hooks.We are unable to keep an...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...ntinuous load has weaken the wall hooks.We are unable to keep any cloths clean as ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
... for cloths to fall back on floor along with with it. People have been complaining about ...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...m applying a permanent fix on the hooks.Please help them to buy strong nuts and bolts ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59340659341 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35974778575 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703296703297 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2581883566 44.8134815571 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229287350907 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087288340052 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415097104247 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103281668864 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454180840316 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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