You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Sorena and I am writing to get more information about the character of one of the articles which has been published this week. The article has been printed in your morning paper on 26/07/2019.
The article is about the childhood of Jeremy, my old friend. We were going into the same school, Old Bob, about 10 years ago but one day he told me that they have to move to another city for his father’s job. Thereafter, I had no contact with him and we were very close friends. I always want to find him and I became quite delighted when saw his childhood story on your paper.
I would be really grateful if you can give me either the contact information of the author of the article or Jeremy. It means a lot to me to meet my old friend again.
I look forward to hearing from you at your first convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you at your first convenience. Yours faithfully, Sorena Ashkani.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56790123457 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50757122089 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3539341329 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259683490833 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978545613308 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426754818053 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137219998194 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160446422528 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.