You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sara,
I hope you are fine, it seems about ages from the last time we were together at university. I am writing with regard to your previous email asking for my recommendation whether going to college or starting a new job.
To begin with, since I know your characterization and your attitude about life, also I follow your lifestyle from your picture in the Instagram, I tend to say getting job is a better choice for you. I think you will not adapt yourself with the college system, studying several hours each day and getting ready for final exams. In fact, you should stick on a specific curriculum and do lots of research and assignment. I am sure you would not be happy as you are an outgoing person who prefers to do adventures.
On the other hand, getting a new job provides you with a new set of challenges and opportunities. In my idea, joining to a new team is an appropriate opportunity to meet new people and learn some new skills which are able to broaden your mind. Also, it is a good chance to experience a professional environment and obtain some valuable expertise.
As I mentioned above, since I know your personality, I think you should apply for a job in which you be able to connect with other people. You are an extrovert person who likes to have interactions with others, so I believe you would be successful as a consultant or advisor in your field of study.
I hope my advice would be helpful, looking forward to hearing from you about your new job.
Take care and be in touch,
Best regards,
Yalda.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, I hope you are fine, it seems about ages...
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Line 23, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke care and be in touch, Best regards, Yalda.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think, in fact, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60215053763 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71551683478 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.9226651269 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7692307692 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273588815796 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101356261499 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675131031634 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141607459093 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841429985301 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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