You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...................,
Dear James,
Hope you are doing great and thank you for writing to me. I learned from your letter that you are in a dilemma of whether you should get enrolled in a college or get employed. I will suggest that initially you must do a job to gain practical experience before opting for higher education.
Since I know you for a long time and I am aware that you always wanted to become an entrepreneur, I don’t recommend you to go to a college first, as now the colleges focus more on theoretical knowledge than on practical experience. They do not help in developing skills of the students that will help them in building successful career. Thus, you will not be satisfied and get the required expertise to open a business.
Undoubtedly, working in a company will allow you to understand the work culture and gaining work experience. Moreover, it will help you to build strong connections which will benefit you in the future.
I’d like you to work in marketing and sales positions as they will help to improve your communication skills and will boost your confidence. Since you are a fresher, you can register to the employment portals such as monster.com, indeed which will help in job hunt.
I hope my suggestion should help you in taking the correct decision. I wish you best of luck for your future endeavours.
Best Wishes.
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vours. Best Wishes. Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.805907173 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77307333651 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0829389523 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9166666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241976125431 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900672452669 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910010401999 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149801230971 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832993847014 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.