You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she/he should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
3. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Kosala,
Thank you for the letter and I am doing well too. It was a pleasure to hear from you after long time.
It was a really great news that you got selected for the university. However I am happier about your other thought searching for a job.
Firstly, I accept the fact which says, going to college is fun and of course you can hang around with your friends for a while. Whereas, I personally believe that getting a profession when you are in your early 20’s is advisable. This is because, most of the companies prefer to pick young and enthusiastic candidates. When you are at college for more than 3 years you will not realize how hard it is to find a suitable job once you are out from college.
Further, since you are good at convincing people and you have a fair people skills, I could recommend you to seek for marketing jobs. If not, you can try to walk in as an intern in a big group of companies. Where you can learn a lot as this is going to be a start of your career. Anyway do your research on the job market as well.
All the very best.
Warm regards,
Vaishnavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'really great news'.
Suggestion: really great news
...ear from you after long time. It was a really great news that you got selected for the universit...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...at you got selected for the university. However I am happier about your other thought s...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, thus, well, whereas, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33492822967 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34810775656 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7020693392 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7142857143 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30575835395 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923264705669 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543810758093 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181901555727 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424450615906 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.