Dear Tom,
Hope this letter finds you well. I feel so sorry for you when I heard that you were laid off in the last letter. I think you should not waste your time at college, instead, get a job first since I think you are compatible with some work in data science.
My brother, We are not young any more. Getting another certification at college is less important for us, as we all got years of working experience in our field. Our first goal is to make money, thus I suggest you can start again. In my opinion, you can enlarge your vision, you not only focus on local jobs, but also go to some small company at other places to help them. Besides, due to the scale of these firms, you can develop your own data paltform with your previous exeperince, I knew there are many small business in my city lacking of experinced data scientist like you.
You can think about that. If you want fo find jobs in my city, write to me. I am happily looking forward your reply.
Yours faithfully
Tony
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 61
- The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 67
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 73
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 56
- Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born What might be the reasons for this What are advantages and disadvantage 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, thus, well, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36363636364 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17137323707 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700534759358 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5474646886 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2611202172 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956120460143 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581480503203 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193886616901 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598339581572 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.