You recently saw a job advertisement for a tour guide, to show your local area and its attractions to English-speaking tourists. Write a letter to a tourist agency and say
– Where did you see this advertisement?
– Explain why you are suitable for this job.
– Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.
- build footpaths
- compile a map of sights
- online interactive map
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Fedor Shestov and I'm writing to apply for a job, a tour guide posted in the local newspaper on the 24th of November, 2016.
Because of my previous experience as a tour guide last summer, I believe my history degree and knowledge of features of the city's parks and its attractions would let tourists have better understanding of historic significance of our areas. If you let me work in your organisation, I will do further research and put them in some excursions to make them more appealing and informative. Moreover, I am fluent in several languages, such as English, Russian and Italian.
Having worked as a tour guide for many years, I have some recommendations, which should be done to attract more people. The most important is to install benches so parks are mainly large and elderly people are unable to have a small break during long-distace quide tours.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to receiving a response from you. As an energetic and hard-working person, I will do my best to increase a satisfaction of your future clients.
Yours sincerely,
Fedor Shestov.
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| 2019-03-04 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Fedor Shestov and Im writing ...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Madam, My name is Fedor Shestov and Im writing to apply for a job, a tour guid...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2016'.
Suggestion: November 2016
...d in the local newspaper on the 24th of November, 2016. Because of my previous experience a...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... break during long-distace quide tours. Thank you for your attention to this mat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91237113402 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92620562325 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4102640286 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197764983016 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797105079561 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796539700465 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11563893468 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531593868093 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.