Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is June. I am writing to you in regards to applying for the position of a tour guide that posted in a local newspaper on 24th of March.
I have five years of experience as a tour guide in a prominent company, and well aware of the pristine history including the main attractions of our area as well. Moreover, apart from English, I am fluent in German, French and Italian languages. In term of my qualification, I am a graduate in History and Arts, which is very helpful to explain the depth importance of our heritage and culture to foreigners.
Although the area has a vast history and beautiful views, some facilities need to improve. I have faced the situation where visitors often complain about the pathways, also proper signboards are vital so that tourists not feel lost.
I look forward to receiving an optimistic reply from your end.
Your Faithfully,
June
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... My name is June. I am writing to you in regards to applying for the position of a tour gui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83974358974 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78458321509 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6498853081 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138124960925 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471235765947 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537517634167 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742204063875 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574379642822 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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