Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
Give details about the course
Describe what equipment you will need for the course
Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear Sir Or Madam,
I am writing you to inquire about the services you are providing at your conference centre. My company has offering a training course to all employees working in the company. Hence, I would like to make sure that your place is the right for all necessary equipment.
It is a 8 hour training for all staff members and in this period, The new Quality testing software will explained overall. Due to the high requirement of clients, My company has decide to give brief training for that new software for Quality testing.
Training course will be presenting in powerpoint slides. Therefore, We will need a projector as well one computer to run it. The course will be going on from 11am from 7pm. It would be great if the hall is ease with air conditions with hot drinks during this training course.
We would like to arrange dinner for all people who are invited in this training. There will be approximate 50 people all together. I would like to know about the buffet price for all members. Please, Send me quotation for the price for a hall with food and without food. Also, Please let me know if you can offer music entertainment at dinner time
I am looking forward to hear from you.
your sincerely
Naysa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t for all necessary equipment. It is a 8 hour training for all staff members a...
^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explain'
Suggestion: explain
..., The new Quality testing software will explained overall. Due to the high requirement o...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned overall. Due to the high requirement of clients, My company has decide to giv...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'decided'.
Suggestion: decided
...requirement of clients, My company has decide to give brief training for that new sof...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...t at dinner time I am looking forward to hear from you. your sincerely Naysa
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... am looking forward to hear from you. your sincerely Naysa
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45185037226 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3293037617 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221935371322 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741655815943 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568037071947 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111739211897 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863105462871 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.