You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.Explain why you took the jobDescribe the problem you experiencedsuggest what could be done about them.

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You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Explain why you took the job
Describe the problem you experienced
suggest what could be done about them.

Dear Sir,
I am writing to explain about some problem that I have faced to.
my name is keo I working at your company as a mechanic assistance. I just took this job as a part - time last week. The contact said work time is 4 hours a day, no more than 20 hours a week. but seen they had change the new boss he did break the agreement which not sound ok to me, instead of working part-time , I have to do all day . it cause a difficulty to my class in order to finish my academic business.
I am wondering if you can take any action in this matter. I want to you to talk with the new guy to solve and let me work as th previous contact. if he need me to continuous work as fulltime , he has to warn me ahead one week and rising my salary.
Thank for your help and I hope to see a changing.
Your sincerely,
keo.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...out some problem that I have faced to. my name is keo I working at your company a...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...m that I have faced to. my name is keo I working at your company as a mechanic a...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...rs a day, no more than 20 hours a week. but seen they had change the new boss he di...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...than 20 hours a week. but seen they had change the new boss he did break the agreement...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d ok to me, instead of working part-time , I have to do all day . it cause a diffi...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...working part-time , I have to do all day . it cause a difficulty to my class in or...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...king part-time , I have to do all day . it cause a difficulty to my class in order...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...g part-time , I have to do all day . it cause a difficulty to my class in order to fi...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...and let me work as th previous contact. if he need me to continuous work as fullti...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e need me to continuous work as fulltime , he has to warn me ahead one week and ri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.89759036145 4.54256449028 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21636723875 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4996951617 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8181818182 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186369138695 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633525254339 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587069303781 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098790305783 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428534428554 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.75 8.71597938144 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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