You recently took a part-time job working for a local company.After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company.In your letter
explain why you took the job.
describe the problems that you experienced.
suggest what could be done about them.
Dear Mr behzadi,
I am a citizen of Tehran and am studying computer science at university. I have worked in your company for a month.I'm writing a letter to you about some of the problems in the company.
This year, due to the rising cost of renting a home and increasing my mother's medical expenses, I had to work part-time at your company.
After a month in your company, I realized that there were major problems that my tasks were affected by.One of the problems is that the company's computer system software is outdated and not compatible with the systems in other companies, which reduces the company's relationship with other companies.And another problem is the irregularities in the company files that I can hardly find.
I have suggestions for problems you have. And I hope you accept them.First of all, if you have no problem financially I will update all the software at the best price. So that you have no problem with it for up to a year.Secondly, if you let me, with the help of a few company staff, sort all the files by date so that I have no trouble finding them.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely,
Daniali
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...zadi, I am a citizen of Tehran and am studying computer science at university...
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Suggestion: Im
...have worked in your company for a month.Im writing a letter to you about some of t...
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Suggestion: I'm
...have worked in your company for a month.Im writing a letter to you about some of t...
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Suggestion: some
... month.Im writing a letter to you about some of the problems in the company. This year...
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Suggestion: One
...problems that my tasks were affected by.One of the problems is that the companys co...
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Suggestion: And
...panys relationship with other companies.And another problem is the irregularities i...
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Suggestion: First
...ms you have. And I hope you accept them.First of all, if you have no problem financia...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...ave no problem with it for up to a year.Secondly, if you let me, with the help of a few ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73205741627 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73909132323 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2076085393 44.8134815571 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.625 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313027850832 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149370942923 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836074848655 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156052762548 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552430820392 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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