In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like.To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Freedom is one of the most important aspects of human life. And the concept of freedom is different in every country. In some countries, children have a great deal of freedom, but in others, they face restrictive behavior.l will explain my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Human beings tend to do everything. People prefer to experience everything in their lives, even if it is a huge loss.Too much freedom makes children act the way they want to and they don't care about the consequences of their work.Statistics show that alcohol and drug addicts are more common among children whose parents have no control over their children's work.And the lack of supervision leaves irreparable damage to the personal and society.
On the other hand, countries that have a lot of restrictions on children are also facing many problems.In Japan, such as, people are trained from childhood to do everything they can or need to do, and if they fail to do their duties well, they are excluded from family and even society.Forcing them to do tasks and limiting them reduces people's self-esteem and causes them to miss a goal and thus have no bright future. And sometimes these behaviors have caused people to commit suicide.They may also experience hazardous work such as drug use and having premature sex in secret.And it is clear that these experiences have terrible consequences for the personal. It can even be said that its negative consequences are far greater than freedom.
In conclusion,I believe that to have children with a healthy mind there must be balanced rules about their freedom of action. Parents should also have a secret supervision of their children's performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, even so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1083032491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85175706255 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.523587706 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.5 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317319684167 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10946627765 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862887368273 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187020603548 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363566606992 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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