Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Divyasree, am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the train timings, for which I had to lose the job offer.
To explain in detail, I was supposed to attend the interview at Banjara Hills, Hyderabad on 15th September at 12.30 PM. As I live in Begumpet, we have a local train towards Banjara Hills at 10.50 am, so I took a ticket asking with appropriate train arrival timings. The cashier informed me that there is a train at 11.25 am, so I waited until the time because it hardly takes 25 minutes to my destination on the train.
However, the train did not arrive until 11.45 am, so I inquired about its arrival time again. He confirmed to me that the train is delayed with another half an hour. As I was getting late, I had to leave immediately in a cab. Because I reached late, I was informed that another person was recruited for the position, and I had lost the chance of being a senior faculty member in a lab.
I am really disappointed with the train timings. So, I would like you to take immediate action and implement a system to inform customers in advance of any possible delays so they can plan their journey accordingly.
I look forward to your swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Divyasree Reddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir/Madam, I, Divyasree, am writing this letter to express my dissa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62666666667 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.670182867 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8370305768 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118897898079 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374567194967 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401063302664 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616552681053 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488970610611 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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