You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin,senior bank manager living in Greenwich Avenue, Rhode Island. I commute to my work by local bus service offered by your department. This letter is in regards to express some annoyance and complain about one of the driver who ride bus 1103.
Let me elucidate the incident. Actually, I am a regular passenger of bus service but I had never experienced such bad behavior of the driver until yesterday. The driver drove the bus very rashly, which made the ride very uncomfortable. On top of it, he did not even stopped at some bus stops, even though there were passengers waiting for the bus. Moreover, he behaved very rudely to passengers who intimate him about their stops. He even did not help the handicapped old passenger to board the bus and even he was going to fall from the running bus while boarding.
Such drivers will continue their misbehaviour and rude attitude until some strong action is taken against them. So, on behalf of all the passengers, I request you to suspend him for a while or take legitimate actions against that driver.
Yours Faithfully
Harry Martin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , senior
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin,senior bank manager living in Greenwich Avenue...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ered by your department. This letter is in regards to express some annoyance and complain abo...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut one of the driver who ride bus 1103. Let me elucidate the incident. Actually,...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'stop'
Suggestion: stop
...fortable. On top of it, he did not even stopped at some bus stops, even though there we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83505154639 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61839434516 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.486315613 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248421495815 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846264121114 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599060155072 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147136241549 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449590118682 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.