You recently travelled on a train which arrived very late, and then you faced many problems. Write a letter to the owner of the company.
In your letter, you should tell:
– where you were going
– what problems you faced
– what action you would like the owner to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apprise you with the delayed arrival of the train service provided by your company from Mumbai to Pune.
I have travelled by this train from Mumbai to Pune on June 5th, 2019 to attend an important business meeting. In fact, I completely relied on this train due to the fact that your company offers the best class and reliable services. But the train was delayed by 2 hours.
Due to this delay, I had missed an important business conference and my company has borne a massive loss because of me. I was the sole representative of that meeting and my late arrival leads to lots of critical issues. Moreover, the overall condition of the train was very poor and unsatisfactory. The sitting area was not at all clean and hygienic for passengers. Last but not least, the daily commuters of this train have mentioned the frequent delay by an hour or so.
Therefore, by considering the aforementioned problems, I would like you to figure out the reason for this delay and take strict action on the issues faced by passengers. Moreover, I suggest you closely monitor this train on a daily basis to ensure reliable service.
I am hoping for prompt action on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Ell green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n important business meeting. In fact, I completely relied on this train due to t...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aily basis to ensure reliable service. I am hoping for prompt action on this ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74885844749 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63541137812 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0743300824 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186895434373 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629219905539 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717819771693 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117247193945 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099664351332 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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