You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say-describe what you left and where it happened-why are these papers important-what would you like the manager to do about it

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left some of my essential documents in the cab that I hired using your company's online portal.

I am attaching the online receipt of the bill.I had taken a cab from Nar road to Nab road on 28th of January.It was too late therefore I took a cab,since the chauffeur look like an exuberant youth so I decided to sit in the front seat such that we could exchange some thoughts during the course of the journey.While talking I had placed the documents on the dashboard.

It was a small folder comprising of my passport and the birth certificate of my newly born baby.Since I am at Singapore for a work I am suppose to apply for the dependent pass for my kid and I have also booked an appointment with Ministry of Manpower on 29th of April.Also there were some highly confidential official documents present in the folder, loosing them might also cost my job.I completely understand that I could have seeked a help from customer care but unfortunately because of the time constraint,I am bound to write directly to you.

It would be of a great help if you could intervene in the matter and expedite the process of recovery of my extremely essential documents before 29th of April 2019. I really appreciate your help in the above stated matter.

Thanks and Regards,
Sumit

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ttaching the online receipt of the bill.I had taken a cab from Nar road to Nab ro...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ttaching the online receipt of the bill.I had taken a cab from Nar road to Nab ro...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...Nar road to Nab road on 28th of January.It was too late therefore I took a cab,sin...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , since
...y.It was too late therefore I took a cab,since the chauffeur look like an exuberant yo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ch that we could exchange some thoughts during the course of the journey.While talking I had placed ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...oughts during the course of the journey.While talking I had placed the documents on t...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oughts during the course of the journey.While talking I had placed the documents on t...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: COMPRISING_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
...the dashboard. It was a small folder comprising of my passport and the birth certificate o...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...birth certificate of my newly born baby.Since I am at Singapore for a work I am suppo...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...Since I am at Singapore for a work I am suppose to apply for the dependent pass for my ...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...h Ministry of Manpower on 29th of April.Also there were some highly confidential off...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...h Ministry of Manpower on 29th of April.Also there were some highly confidential off...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...er, loosing them might also cost my job.I completely understand that I could have...
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Line 7, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...rtunately because of the time constraint,I am bound to write directly to you. I...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62343096234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71483961966 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.582401489 44.8134815571 407% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.166666667 76.5299724578 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.8333333333 16.8248392259 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117753239542 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611734568647 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680703663098 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897431684267 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069959873281 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 8.37731958763 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.