You recently visited a store to repair your computer but they couldn't fix it, write a letter to the store manager and say,
- What was the problem with your computer?
- What happened in the store?
- What do you want them to do about it?
Dear Joy Sir,
I am writing this letter to make you aware that my computer problem has not been solved yet, although your team took 1 weak to repair it, unfortunately it is still in same condition. Computer screen is not displaying any picture and the battery is not getting charged.
Your technical team had work on it by replacing battery, but still the problem is persisting. Rajah the engineer, was working on-screen display and he has also repaired it, but the visibility is not clear. More importantly they are taking more time to make changes as I felt. For example, just to replace the battery they took 4 days.
Therefore, I have decided to get this repair from another shop, I request you to courier the computer back to my home address as soon as possible. Plus, please convey me if there is any pending dues, I will try to finish the payment till coming weekend.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and assist me in getting computer back to my place.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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| 2019-08-14 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joy Sir, I am writing this letter to make you awa...
^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er back to my place. Yours sincerely, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68926553672 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55395978583 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2929354315 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183663330094 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662426421115 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457236910399 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103848481656 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472752431233 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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