People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Admission to colleges or universities is these days a common trend to follow. Majority of the young students prefer to join these institutes for different reasons, some for future development or to have a disciplined life through education. In my opinion students priorities to have enough knowledge through colleges which can support them in future goals.
A fundamental reason to take part in the education system is to have a disciplined, educated life which later eases to have balanced career. Some prefer to have an education of bachelor’s degrees and others move ahead to pursue masters degrees. Although in the past, people used to avoid higher education, in recent times educational degrees have a gain higher importance in the industrial scale and candidates are forced to take education from colleges or universities. For illustration, these days, the majority of the multinational companies seeks a candidate who is graduated and sets graduation as a basic requirement to fulfil the vacant place.
Another predominant reason is to have a disciplined and knowledgeable life. All people who take part in education does not proceed to take jobs in the future, some of them prefer to join family businesses, even though they take participation in degree institutes to have self-awareness, honoured life ahead. Furthermore, education teaches pupils those which they are unable to learn at home or on their own. For instance, the competitiveness which boosts the confidence and improves skills of the competitor.
In conclusion, education is a vital step in our society nowadays. Colleges’ admission is the basic platform to have degree certificates which are essential to attain jobs in the market. Moreover, to have career oriented and independent life university education is a must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and improves skills of the competitor. In conclusion, education is a vital step...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40989399293 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18634273615 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5955622202 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139762561453 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546966173329 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392513380543 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949858670221 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386810638854 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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