Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to appreciate the members of your staff for their timely and quick assistance at the time of misfortune happened with me in the cinema hall.
Yesterday, I came to your cinema hall during the evening show. However, I arrived late at the hall, and the guard assisted me towards the seat that I had booked. Since there was dark in the movie hall, I was unable to see the path and found one of the broken steps on the staircase which resulted me slipped off from the stairs and I fell sideways. As a result, I sprained my ankle.
At the same time, the crew on duty was very kind and immediately provided me a first-aid to alleviate the pain to some extent. Later, I had decided to leave and consult the doctor. I would like to thank you staff for providing me a wheelchair and assisted me smoothly towards the exit in the parking area where Ambulance was waiting for me as one of your staff member called to the nearest hospital for a medical help.
On the regard of uncertainty, I would suggest you get the staircase repaired so that such incidents can be avoided in the future. Meanwhile, please advise your guards to guide the audience to their seat and sign of caution at the hall entry would also prove to be useful.
Thankyou for your cooperation and support.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57613168724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43464246944 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6606526413 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129203325794 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415141441248 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359830323806 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678994959745 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358893846114 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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