Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effect does this have people, what are the demerits and what are the job opportunities.
Indubitably, the rapidly increasing of teleshopping has caused a major effect in this modern world. This essay will explain both benefits and drawbacks of online shopping and will mention the employment opportunities.
The main negative effect addressed in this topic is product reliability and unsecured financial transactions. In other words, a customer is unable to try the product during the time of purchasing online from a e-commerce websites. Consequently, a product could be a faulty if it has been bought from online shopping. For instance, when a customer buys an item like power bank, which is a portable charging device for mobile phones that the customer could not test before. Besides, another potential of drawback is that financial risk, this is second concern of online shopping. To cite an example, when customer buys a product via credit card, most of them face a fraudulent activities such as loss of money, information stolen of credit card while buying from e-commerce websites.
On the other hand, electronic shopping plays an important role in the driving business world as entrepreneurs who can reach customers all over the world. Moreover, they can sell a wide variety of items at anytime anywhere across the globe via online platforms such as trending apps like Facebook and Instagram. As a result, the number of employment opportunities will increase the growing demand in the future.
To conclude, although there are some downsides for the people to shop online in terms of product genuity and financial risk, it also provides a major benefits to the modern society. Thus, everyone should use it an appropriate manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ring the time of purchasing online from a e-commerce websites. Consequently, a pr...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...it card, most of them face a fraudulent activities such as loss of money, information stol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23684210526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83504762807 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1681377455 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125665594531 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487430681323 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378562327746 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843760765729 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036453835298 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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