You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayedby a day.Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Complain about the delayExplain the problems that it caused you Ask for a lett

Dear sir/madam,

My name is harpreet, a passenger of delayed flight no 23564 to India on 1.1.2020. As a regular customer, i have satisfactory experience with your flights. I am writing this letter, however, to lodge a complain about delayed flight.

Upon arrival, i would have a incredibly important meeting with a overseas client and this could not be postponed. The meeting would be organized to charity cause for specially abled children, as i am working in a non profit organization.

Being good weather conditions, the return flight was delayed, which caused huge loss to my organization. I, therefore, would like to ask for a compensation for my further flight. Your assistance to this matter is highly appreciated and waiting for your response soon.

Your sincerely,
Harpreet kaur

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, My name is harpreet, a passenger of delayed flight no 23564 t...
^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghts. I am writing this letter, however, to lodge a complain about delayed flight...
^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...writing this letter, however, to lodge a complain about delayed flight. Upon arrival,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...about delayed flight. Upon arrival, i would have a incredibly important meeti...
^
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... flight. Upon arrival, i would have a incredibly important meeting with a ove...
^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ave a incredibly important meeting with a overseas client and this could not be p...
^
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... cause for specially abled children, as i am working in a non profit organization...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.265625 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03108891325 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6953125 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3049542346 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237112900194 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095685292846 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062356457164 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145028439354 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795995134806 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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