You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
Say how you feel about his performance
Give details of your musical activities
Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Hi Rahul,
Myself is Rajesh and I am writing here to express my gratitude for you regarding the performance that you gave in city center townhall concert.
I went there with my office colleagues to enjoy the musical night there I saw your performance and it was so impeccable you executed it very well you demonstrated your command over contemporary music you melodious voice was entirely seamless and synced with the nodes.
I am also having an interest in music and fond of participating in singing competitions of county level. I secured runner up position in last month's county challenge. There, I figured that I am legging in new style of singing and I need to polish on my contemporary singing in order to win such musical hackathon's.
Here I would like your guidance and assistance, as you have demonstrated your mastery over it and I firmly believe that your supervision would definitely help me out to secure first position in next year's county singing championship.
Kindly, let me know your availability and convenience. I am residing near to your place only; Hence, I can easily visit your place for rehearsals.
Looking forward to hearing positive response from you soon.
Thanks and Regards!
Your Faithfully,
Rajesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n singing competitions of county level. I secured runner up position in last mont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10194174757 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91312697877 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1252993249 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280561738817 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969713856084 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905835723823 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145957021102 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904926572861 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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