You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye and thank them for their help during your stay.
Explain how they helped
What you will miss the most about the area where you lived
Invite them to visit you
Hi Raghav,
Hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to let you know that I am moving back to Bangalore my project engagement is now come to an end here and I am returning to my base city.
It's a mix feeling for me, I am excited to going back as well as sad to think going away from you. As, it has been a pleasant time staying here and it all because of you and your family help and support. I remember when I shifted in this town, I was struggling to find accommodation and good food point. you arranged me a rented place in your neighborhood and helped me to locate vegetarian mess.
I would like to take this opportunity to thank you and family for all your kind support and good gesture. I am really going to miss our house parties and evening walk that we used to go together. Anyways, life is all about moving on and adoption the situation, but it is going to difficult few weeks there to living away from you all.
I would also like to invite you and family to visit my house there in Bangalore, we can spend good time again together and relive the pleasant memories.
Again, a big thanks and keep in touch!
Waiting for your response on visit soon.
Regards
Ramesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... and I am returning to my base city. Its a mix feeling for me, I am excited to g...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...find accommodation and good food point. you arranged me a rented place in your neig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, really, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3127753304 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31790076078 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594713656388 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5853868907 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296056568056 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106930759678 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701199872604 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136245938939 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590390089687 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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