You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter
• tell your friend what the event was
• explain why you think your friend would like the event
• invite them to come to the event with you
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing great. I am writing to tell you about the most exciting concert I attended last weekend and I am really eager to invite you to the same. Let me explain you further.
It was the music concert by one of our favorite singer named Sanam organized in JNU campus Delhi. Moreover, you would be amazed to know that I booked the front row seat and was able to see him clearly, as well as enjoyed each of his songs. Apart from these, I also got the chance to take his autograph. Though it was not possible for those sitting in second row.
As far as I know, he is the singer, who is close to your heart and I have seen you listening all his sings every time. Also, you were desperately waiting for this event to get organized in our city. So, here is the chance for you to enjoy to the fullest.
Having said that, the commencement of the concert is on weekend the 3rd July. Besides, I have VIP pass available with me, so you do not have to worry about the entrance fee. We can go together to attend his passionate event and have gala time as we used to have in childhood. Not only we can enjoy but also can share our experience with our friends.
I look forward to see you soon.
Yours loving
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ience with our friends. I look forward to see you soon. Yours loving Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, moreover, really, second, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22821576763 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14802341231 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5153951158 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6875 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23223587814 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785152898762 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538334111054 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126940720787 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713756079368 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.