You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter
• tell your friend what the event was
• explain why you think your friend would like the event
• invite them to come to the event with you
Dear Satish,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health.As you know that how passionate both of us are about different kind of bikes.We love to take drives of various models.I am writing this letter to tell you that I went to an event of a brand new bike launch.It was a splendid one.You were out-of-town and I got an invitation from my colleague which I couldn't resist.
Event was full of surprises.Never knew that it would be such a grand one.The organisers invited famous Bollywood celebrity "John Abraham" who was a major attraction.Also, the bike name is "Suzuki Hayabusa-350" which has excellent features.It's mechanism is one of the best.
A game was organised by an event company.As per that,first five lucky winners had a chance to take test drive of the bike on the same day.Guess what, I was one of them and got an opportunity to take a test drive which was an excellent experience.
Do let me know about your plans in advance so that we can go together next time.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Warm washes,
Rajesh P.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... this letter finds you in a good health.As you know that how passionate both of us...
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...of us are about different kind of bikes.We love to take drives of various models.I...
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...t resist. Event was full of surprises.Never knew that it would be such a grand one....
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...braham' who was a major attraction.Also, the bike name is 'Suzuki Hayabusa...
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...-350' which has excellent features.Its mechanism is one of the best. A game ...
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Suggestion: to hearing
...o together next time. Looking forward to hear from you. Warm washes, Rajesh P.
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...forward to hear from you. Warm washes, Rajesh P.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75135135135 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05670776838 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.353446781 44.8134815571 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.5 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220722559527 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855013430416 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642300522596 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103370114196 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580483289357 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 8.62886597938 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.