You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
ask your friend to send you one of the photographs
explain why you need that particular photograph
tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Aman,
I hope you will find this letter in radiant health the best of spur. Also, you must be refreshed by this time, after the adventurous trip we had last month.
I am writing this letter to ask for the group photograph which we clicked on London Bridge during sunset time. It is an amazing experience when the shadow of the reddish sun appears in the blue water of the canal.
There is a photography contest in our city next month. Therefore, I want to submit the same photograph for competition as it is one of our of our best photograph. Also, this piece of art is linked with environmental beauty as well, there are good chances that I'll win the first prize with it.
I forgot my copy of the photo at the airport while checking in my luggage. I placed it over my bag and I didn't notice when it fell down from it.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of our'.
Suggestion: of our
...photograph for competition as it is one of our of our best photograph. Also, this piece of ar...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... luggage. I placed it over my bag and I didnt notice when it fell down from it. I ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt notice when it fell down from it. I am looking forward to your prompt respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43452380952 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36912987414 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6677745638 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7272727273 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974789544281 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326568534319 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421496786104 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562020796466 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535939069781 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.