You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe
-Competition and prize.
-About the photograph.
-Invite your friend.
Dear Annie,
I’m just writing to share my precious occasion of winning a photography competition.
As you’re aware, I applied for the Pictographic contest, which was held in New Delhi last month. Fortunately, yesterday I’ve got the first prize in this event and they have offered me a free training course at the National Photograph Institute, Mumbai for three months as a prize.
Honey, in the beginning, I was a bit confused to select the theme of my snap. After some deliberation with my family, I decided to shoot a wildlife creature. The picture of a little rabbit, who was strolling in the grass was perfect for this competition. The photo mainly depicts the beautiful scenery of the forest.
Our community has decided to exhibit my art in the upcoming exhibition. I would be delighted If you could spare some time and visit our local museum on Sunday to attend my exhibition. I’m sure you’ll gonna have a great time being with friends and few artists.
Hope to see you soon.
With Love.
Katie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'll' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...o attend my exhibition. I’m sure you’ll gonna have a great time being with friends an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6897042927 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5247476967 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116335697261 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367814546334 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294380317879 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556206807023 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031036211314 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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