you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.however, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.you also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been staying on rent in Flat No 21, Bakerville Building since last November. There are few issues that I am facing with the accommodation. Certain items need immediate repair. At the same time the current rent is not affordable to me.
The faucet of the common washroom is leaking leading to wastage of water. The tiles of the hallway have been damaged by last occupants when they were moving out. At the same time the lights are not working there creating a dangerous scenario. The air conditioning system of my room is malfunctioning as well. The door at the rear of the flat that faces the garden does not lock properly creating safety issues.
All of the issues are critical and need immediate attention. I would request you to get the above items replaced or repaired at the earliest. To reduce the burden of rent, I want to invite one of my friends to occupy the spare bedroom.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Tarun
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- Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hos 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ck properly creating safety issues. All of the issues are critical and need immediate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68786127168 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50875043159 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8419493796 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.9285714286 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962699717616 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276284790666 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360143281158 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055785701388 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625364503878 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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