You rented a car from a car rental company The air conditioner has stopped working You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired Write a letter to the company In your letter introduce yourself explain the situation say what action y

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You rented a car from a car rental company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction regarding your customer service.

Half a month ago, I rented a car named Honda Image from your company and my customer number is Ch1245. I rented this car to spend my summer vacation with my family, and while I was going to the market for shopping suddenly it started producing a strange noise from the engine. I checked and found that the wire of air-conditioning was completely burned which puts me and my family into trouble as we had to suffer a lot on that hot summer day.

A week ago, I approached your company by a call and did not get any response from your side. Kindly take the action to correct the damage, otherwise replace the car with another one. If it is not possible, refund my money.

Looking forward to a positive and prompt response from your side.

Yours sincerely,

Aspect AUR

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62658227848 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57961670955 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6613753614 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222135458824 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859667185737 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727222088637 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123534210058 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483228336992 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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