You rented a car from a car rental company. The air-conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company, In your letter:
-Introduce yourself
-Explain the situation
-Say what you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am writing to complain about a problem on air-conditioning system of the car I have rented from your company three days ago.
This happened when I was on my trip to attend a seminar in Manila City, Philippines. Unfortunately, when I was about half-way to my supposed destination, I noticed that the temperature inside the vehicle seems to be getting warm. Then, eventually the air-conditioner has totally shut-off. To my dismay, I was forced to open the windows so that I can clearly intake air from the outside. As you would not know, I can be easily suffocated without a circulating air. Thus, this problems concerns me big time, and that I already called upon your office a week ago raising my issue but no one on your team responded yet.
In this regard, I would like to ask for your service on repairing the car's air-conditioner or if it is possible for replacement of the unit will be greatly favorable on my part as I have already given the payment in full for a month long use.
I do hope for your immediate attention regarding this matter. Please contact me once you have scheduled to look upon this.
Your faithfully,
Fiona Joanna V. Cruz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ocated without a circulating air. Thus, this problems concerns me big time, and that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, thus, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69711538462 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91404459132 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658653846154 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7648410324 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8181818182 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164089272978 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601708807237 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448168748413 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104652101248 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441291213329 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.