You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.Write a letter to the company. In your letter– introduce yourself– explain the situation– say wha

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You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.

Write a letter to the company. In your letter

– introduce yourself
– explain the situation
– say what action you would like the company to take

Write at least 150 words

You do not need to write your address.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the faulty air conditioning of the rental car which I lend from your shop, Speed rentals, at Broadway, on the 2nd of January.

My name is Shan and I am a sales executive. I have to travel a lot on a daily basis. I assume that you might understand how difficult it is to travel in a vehicle without proper air conditioning at this hot and humid weather.

I hired a Toyota Camry, registration number 2345 on the 2nd of January, at your rental shop. The very first day, I took the car from your centre, the air condition had noise but your staff assured me that it is normal and it will not be a problem. But the air condition stopped functioning on the way itself. I called up the customer service and launched a complaint. Since then no one has responded.

Now, it is been one week and I would highly appreciate if you could replace the car soon. I do not have any specific choice but only one condition that the vehicle should be in perfect condition.

I am expecting to hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Shan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oning at this hot and humid weather. I hired a Toyota Camry, registration numb...
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Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tomer service and launched a complaint. Since then no one has responded. Now, it i...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40298507463 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56454029199 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6555335676 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0769230769 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19358822798 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599447578821 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533788607407 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106729273096 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299947853561 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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