You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.In your letter, you should tell: • why you ride a bicycle to work • what the problem is with the parking •

Dear Mr. Komati,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with parking space availability.

I commute to the office on a bike, as my workplace is very near to my accommodation and It would take less space in parking also is very convenient to access.
The issue is that there is no space available to park it, as I am in second shift the motorcycles are also parked in the spaces provided to bicycle, as a result, I have to cram my bike on the street with wheel lock or sometimes have to wait for parking space and waste my time searching for one.

I recommend that the number of parking slots should be provided passes so that the person who has brought the pass can come at any time of the day and park his vehicle without any hassle. I hope that you take this matter as a first priority.
Thank you for your attention.

Yours faithfully.
Spunky slob

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4625 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58888851633 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.0677116496 44.8134815571 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.0 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16238881907 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748135387188 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439715080007 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101660712669 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420148161156 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.