Dear Mr Ramesh,
I am writing to order a book, please consider this as a paramount priority.
I am looking for a book of thermodynamics by author Chris Jeffry. I have already searched in the local markets and was not able to find a single copy, it is believed that this book is a rare one.
I have an exam next month, and I need this book urgently, as it is the major subject of this semester. In addition, if I could get it by this weekend it would be appreciable and also I am a member of your book club.
I will pay the half amount now and intend to pay the remaining amount at the time of delivery. In case of any doubt please contact me at 85421763, and my address is house number 45 on MG street. I hope that you find this book as early as possible.
Thank you for your service, Hoping for a positive reply.
Your faithful,
spunky slob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... thermodynamics by author Chris Jeffry. I have already searched in the local mark...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lieved that this book is a rare one. I have an exam next month, and I need thi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24848484848 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41744501572 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5729606228 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210486811206 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819413959387 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079850597558 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113275322567 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639204880079 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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