Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement for volunteers in upcoming sports event which will be soon going to organized by you charitable organization.
I want to participate in the volunteer role for this event as I have a keen interest in managing social campaigns, especially the ones organized by charitable trusts. Besides, I am a Basketball coach in the Indira Gandhi International stadium and it is one of my hobbies to be a part of a noble clause.
Moreover, I have been associated with different social organizations for the past ten years. Also, all the past events run successfully under my supervision such as blood donation camps and athlete social events.
Since I am familiar with such kinds of work, I assure you of taking full responsibility for making necessary arrangements for the event on the coming weekend. I am very hopeful to be considered for this charitable event.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response to my letter.
Yours Sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...dvertisement for volunteers in upcoming sports event which will be soon going to organ...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'organize'
Suggestion: organize
...ports event which will be soon going to organized by you charitable organization. I w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14201183432 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11695622794 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4836742282 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162956755866 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649363529686 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466438575787 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889438782375 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523618085456 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.