You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter• explaining the problems• suggesting ways to help the situation• pro

Essay topics:

You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting

Dear Neighbors,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the current situation which is happening in my garage.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. We have been staying in this apartment for more than 10 years. Since we all know each other for these many years I have allowed to park your two wheelers in my vehicle parking area for free. Recent time frequently getting complains from association manager for partial parking which blocks the passage. So, let us park our vehicles inside the yellow line, also use two-wheeler center stand by this way one more vehicle can accommodate in our space. According to me this would be the best solution to solve the problems, if there is a second thought then that case let us meet by this weekend on our community meeting hall. Since I must share the vehicle count and other related details to apartment security officers.
Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Sreenivasan

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'parking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: parking
...her for these many years I have allowed to park your two wheelers in my vehicle parking...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...e vehicle can accommodate in our space. According to me this would be the best solution to solv...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92215568862 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60038859951 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706586826347 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8965140288 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170603898337 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565872915147 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402497960343 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836170949748 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531764758699 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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