In recent years,.many 1maltlocal stiops ha1re closed because customers
travel to large shopping centres or. -malls to do their shopping.
Is this. a. positive or a negative development?
Of late, visiting shopping centers or malls has become a sign of modernization. These days customers buy products from big shopping malls due to this fact many small shops closed in last few years. In my opinion it is negative development which impacts small time investors to do their business. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of shopping centers. Following this, reasoned conclusion will be shared.
First and foremost, these days young generation do their education inclined with their business plan. Some of the youngster aspire to be a success entrepreneur in their life. To do this they start their first step by running a small local shop. Furthermore, on their success will expand their business with employing many candidates. This type of thought process helps economic and business growth in all sort of financial class, also overcomes the unemployment challenges.
On the side, corporate companies started expanding their business in all sectors, nowadays you can buy grocery items, milk products, fruits and vegetables in shopping center. Many young students and next generation people believe that purchasing certain items in shopping centers provides them better offer price or cheap price then buying in local shops whereas most people not aware of hidden chargers. Additionally, it is a prestige matter that they can earn respect wearing a branded shirt or pant from big stores to show their status. To prove that, Anna University had done many surveys on buying products from shopping center and the results show that 80% of young people like to buy in shopping centers due to better discounts and 20% of people say they buy in local shops since they won’t charge extra tax on the items.
To sum up, people who cares about economic growth and buying a product with reasonable price then should support small local shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, then, whereas, sort of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12828947368 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5148257589 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2659059429 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207013472422 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791244017129 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533587634146 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124810693232 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955372616492 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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